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Carita
Carita
barred

not all visions captured
are beautiful and good
stories should prick sharp
like the barbed wires
circling the view
cutting through
your barred bed-room
window reflecting
the neighbour’s television
opening to the world
brick, cement, antenna, cloud
textures rough and brown
rusted silver linings caught up
in the picture of my (i)
mage out of focus too
often taking for granted
this site/sight/in spite
of tear-shined lenses
reflecting the bars
a/light through lids
moist voids clenched might
only an abstraction
a distraction, this moment
fading, depth receding
camera-less without a shot
in the dark i wander back
down the street to wait
for this weight to shift
this phase to lift…






p.s. thank you (you know who) for thinking of me last night, for reaching out from another world. just when the rabbit hole dropped me down, another story. thanks for reminding me there’s light back up top, that it was my choice to (s)p(e)lunk… our “hippy phone” (as M calls it) is still connected, i suppose.

April 26, 2004 | 2:43 PM Comments  0 comments

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Jedimike Michael Newton-McLaughlin
April 26, 2004 | 8:15 PM
changes?
Carita-
Your last few updates have been poetry and prose... it feels obvious that you're going through some deep thinking right now in your life. I just wanted to say that while perhaps it is difficult for some to understand completely what the meaning and context of the events/ideas that are motivating these changes and subsequent writing... but that I'm glad you're sharing it with 'the TIG community.' I think that seeing poetry of the personal and reflective nature helps to make us remember that we should or have done the same thing... so again, thanks!
Carita Carita
April 27, 2004 | 3:05 PM
Context.
Fair. I've been admittedly selfish with my latest entries, not really caring to explain too much. I'll put up a less abstract entry now...
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